Here is Monday's quickwrites.
As the smoke slowly crept closer, I ... coughed and coughed, louder and louder. Smoke surrounded me. Water slowly but painfully dropped from my eyes "Drip, Drip." I ran like a soft breeze of wind. My feet dragged along the ground. Scars dug deep into my crackling skin. "AAGHH!" Fire burned into my veins, I reached for a breath, then the fire caught me and dragged me in. Goodbye.
The crows were gathering, the hunt was on ... me, sticks snapped into my toes. My blue velvet dress dragged along the ground, a big black crow dived down and clawed my dress into a T shirt, the egg fell into a soft pile of hay. Small cracks slowly appeared on the egg, I ran like a gust of wind, found a safe place for the egg and left it there before I was turned into smithereens.
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